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Theme Song:



Yes, my comic has a song. I listened to it every time I worked on a page for the past two years. If The Locked Maze were a movie, this song would be playing during the closing credits:

New Order, Temptation (YouTube version)

I know, I know, technically it should be an Oingo Boingo song (and trust me, there was A LOT of Oingo Boingo listening as well), but I never found an Oingo Boingo song that was specifically tied to my comic. Although Try to Believe is pretty close. :)


Final Explanation:



The Significant Other has said that none of you will ever speak to me again after this ending. Sorry. I know it seems pretty rotten (but I mean, when has this comic been happy? really?), but I had my reasons.

I have said before that I ended TLM with a Greek theme: the Marriage to Death (a sometimes metaphorical/sometimes literal theme in Greek stories). It recurs throughout literature in small and large ways, from Antigone to Romeo and Juliet, even in the popular Vampire novels of the last 100+ years. The simplest explanation is that it is a literal take on the idea that marriage IS death - if nothing else than the death of the maiden state - and to some extent I am sure the old world believed that, seeing as Roman girls were sent down the aisle in a big blood-red veil. Some people prefer the interpretation that women have a special connection/attraction to death, and in many cultures it was the women who were left responsible for the preparations of bodies for burial. But this wasn't really what captured my imagination. I was taken instead by the ideas in Johnston's The Restless Dead (a book which heavily influenced TLM). She discussed how all monsters are liminal in the Greek myths - half one thing, half another. For young maidens, killed at the cusp of womanhood before they could complete their role in marrying and having children, they became terrifying demons, perpetuating their grief by taking down other young maidens too soon, or targetting babies or husbands in an attempt to complete the part of their lives that was missed. But some of them also became powerful goddesses, like Persephone, who had the power to reverse death, to show mercy and reward love in an afterlife that was otherwise hostile and absolute. And I like that. I like the idea that some people acquire great power by experiencing something truly awful, and coming through it: broken, grieving, liminally stranded between the naive world of the optimists and the cold world of the dead. And in that between-state, they can accomplish things no one else can do. Holly's story is about that. She was broken, and she took it and used it as her power to defeat someone no one else could touch. She will never belong, anywhere she goes, but her outcast existence will also take her places no one else has been and teach her things no one else knows.

And if you want to imagine all the things that happen from this point on (since I will never write that story), just ask yourself these questions:

  • Why has Kernan never found his dead mother, seeing as he can come and go freely in the afterlife?

  • Who and where is Kernan's father?

  • What will happen to Anna, Lucky, and the others now that the Queen and Morgan are gone?

  • Will Holly ever learn to see things the way Morgan does?

  • What is on the other side of the Maze?

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Given 2011-07-19
The suggester says, "The very last page of one artist's journey from being pretty ok to being pretty AWESOME. The Locked Maze can be read in its entirety right here ~> http://thelockedmaze.com/ "
The Locked Maze 3: Page 49 by ~mleiv is a really beautiful page that leads me to read through the entire archive. ( Suggested by =blix-it and Featured by `kangel )
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Mood: Awestruck ~Hascuko Mar 23, 2012  Student General Artist
oh my! that was probably the best comic I have ever read! It ended at the perfect place, but it still could end hapilly...

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... or so said the tiny and colourfuly grotesque rabbit from the blue wicked land.

"I tried not to show them the darkness that envelopes the Earth but I wished to show them the light that resides in their hearts."~H.B.
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~mleiv Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw, thanks! I am so happy you liked it! :)
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~bandeau Mar 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
comic* not comment. Ugh.

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~bandeau Mar 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I can't even remember when I started reading your comment, but about a quarter of the way through book II I decided to stop reading, and haunt your page until the story was done. Instant gratification, and all that. (Does instant gratification work, if you wait months/years for something to enjoy it all at once? I'm going to not think on that too hard, now.)

I should be in my kitchen deciding on dinner, and instead I'm having a hard time looking away from the last page. It's a fitting ending, I think, and really it's the only one that would have "felt right".

It makes me glad I waited, to get it all at once. :) Now...If only I had it in book form... Haha.

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~mleiv Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw, thanks a lot! And it's all sold thru IndyPlanet if you want a print copy, including the first issue of the new comic I am working on. In fact, there are lots of print options -> [link]
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~dehumanise Jan 14, 2012  Student General Artist
wait.... thats it? REALLY?
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~OlalaBear Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So, I loved this story so much. The fae are very interesting to me and this story was so intriging! But I have to admit, the first thing out of my mouth when I reached the very end of the last page was "Oh damn..." Haha I hate that it is over with, but the story will probably continue to float around in my head until my mind comes up with little clips folding out from the story, just a little movie that will play in my head. Either that, or I will just draw Kernan because I feel the need to fangirl over him... Thank you for creating such an awesome story! :heart:
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~mleiv Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think I'm still in mourning myself. I find it hard to read the comic now or listen to the song. And my head is somewhere else now anyway, with new characters to be obsessing over. ^^ I like the idea of it lingering in other people's heads, though. Kernan had way too little screen time as it was.
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Wow! Just, simply, wow.
I stumbled upon this a while back, and went to the first page and started reading. I stayed up two hours later than I intended last night, just captivated by the story.
The art is great! I mean it. Sure, a little rough at the beginning, but there are some great bits that I truly love. Nesbit is well drawn, but I think my favourite has to be the cwn annwn, they just look so great in almost every scene they're in. Overall, though, the art is really nice. I love your style.
And the story is fantastic (and fantastical). Gripping. And simple. I liked that. I know this was, what, ten years of your life? But for me, it was much shorter, so the story seems almost too short. I know it ended before I wanted it to. But I liked that it was simple and to the point, not endless rounds of defeating one more powerful witch/monster/evil thing after another, with twists and turns the whole way through, like some fantasy stories. This really felt, well, plausible. The whole time it felt like I was reading a real story. And at the end, although I was sad to see them go, it was fitting to see that the story was really at an end, no more made up stuff just to see more of the characters, the story was told, and we said goodbye.

Thank you!

I enjoyed every minute of reading this.
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~mleiv Nov 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! I don't think I will ever be able to draw as well as I'd like, to tell these stories. But I'd rather have them out there, done, than be perfect. I keep telling myself this as I start the Next Project because I could spend decades stuck doing concept art and stuff, and I have to force myself not to obsess over that part.
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